[tiberius]

I lasted almost two minutes.
I don't think a piano and a drum kit works in this instance. The hi-hats sound
very loose indeed and just rattle for an eternity on each hit. That may work in a rock
song but it doesn't here.
Thought the music was very atmospheric, you may have a good ability to compose
for cinema perhaps but it would have worked better with strings in the background
rather than a drum kit.