[RicD]

Right on it man! Love the vocals even more now. The drums sound good but the shaker hit needs to accent the snare not the other way around. It keeps drawing my ear away from the vocals which are awesome IMHO. Great lyrics. Would it be good to bring up what sounds like a guitar pluk synth a little. I like the melody it's doing? Ofcourse this is my taste.What matters is yours.
It's good to be happy doing what you love and it shows! Are you selling any of this? I think this song needs to be published by somebody but they better have great pipes to do it any better than this.