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Originally Posted by redbak1  Mate like this alot as a song, again mate I would start singing sooner, maybe you could write another verse after the first chorus and then a bridge turn around into another verse then tag with band playing out with a fade, just some thoughts mate, vox up, to me buddy good words need to be herd other wise why write them.
redbak1 |
But with regard to your comment about the vocal. It is kinda lost in the mix/ effect .
Neil