[lolzgreg]

This sounds like it was tracked quite well.

I will tell you despite the distant sound, the guitar in the left ear with the over-the-top reverb needs to be high passed to hell, its muddying up the whole ear.

The vocalist is good. Bring up her vocals a bit. They get annihilated during the louder parts of the song.

Add at least a little more compression on the drums. The room mic (if you had one) will really help a lot here. If you duplicate the room mic and compress it to hell and lie it under the mix you'll get some more punch. I suggest starting with the drums alone and bringing up things one by one till you can get something more cohesive.

-Greg