[robgb]

Thanks guys. I always have trouble with the high end, thanks to damaged ears. I seem to be losing my ability to hear it, so I tend to overcompensate.

And, yes, the song is very poppy. A little too much so for my taste, but I wrote it as I recorded it, and it just happened to turn out that way -- much to my chagrin. Maybe I'm just a pop guy.

Anyway, I'll try to lace some guitars in through the chorus and add some backing vocals and see what I get. It's all pretty much hit or miss.