I've listened to this thing so many times I've lost all objectivity. I'm inclined to hate it at this point (it sounds like Pat Boone trying to do contemporary from, say, circa 1990), but thought I'd throw it out there for the hell of it.
It's unfinished. Needs some kind of vocal thing to tie it all together at the bridge and through to the end, but I haven't figured it out yet -- and I'm not sure I want to.
Any comments are welcome:
http://www.robertgregorybrowne.com/Run-Away.mp3