Thanks for the detailed listen and notes! Maybe its not my tongue but my brain's unwillingness to tell it when to go and stop so that its in time with the rest of me.
I think I've fixed the panning issue. I moved the guitar parts over to the other side to balance up with the high hat better and they're mono panned to the same place. They share a bus now too, so the reverb should be good to go.
I think I've fixed the wrong note at 50.5. Pff... jazz is still something of a mystery to me. What's more, I'm very used to performing with a guitarist who really goes outside the box. He pulls it off much better than I ever will. I should probably stay inside the box for now.
Ending wasn't really a fade out at all... just the organ using the swell pedal. But I've made it into a fade now. Mmmm... maybe a little too long.