Interesting choice of topic for a song, I like it.
I'll second the sloppiness on the drums, but if considering you're doing everything yourself as a multi-instrumentalist, respect. I find the bass drum is a tad much, maybe turn it around to blend with the bass guitar a little more (turn down the volume a bit, and perhaps reduce some of the mids).
The guitar and vocals sound great, I'll second the smallness of the guitar, but I'm sure you'll fix that.
Awesome composition