[lolzgreg]

I think its well put together. The instrument choices are good. When the pan flute acts as the lead instrument, I believe it gets a tad too busy IMHO. I think the song should have a point where it dies down to almost one or two instruments, so that it can have a break from the overall feel, then come back in with more instruments than toward the beginning. I like your use of the stereo spread.

-Greg