[King83]

I'm not an expert but I LOVE the rhythm guitar tone and sound, I wouldn't mess with them at all.. maybe bring up the bass a little more to help feel the void that people mention is missing, that thin feeling.

Great song though, I enjoyed it and once the song kicks in the bass drum isn't that bad.

As someone who also uses a drum machine of sorts to make my music I'll suggest something my drummer friend did - Make the drummer ADD. Doesn't mean the beat has to change, but maybe he changes his preference from the high hats to the ride, from the ride to crashes then to the ride bell. I think that will help bring a little more dynamic to it as that one cymbal is just there over and over and over again.

Also every time I hear that splash I want to hear a crash cymbal right after. It's like a tension cymbal and should lead into something.

Just some thoughts, overall really nice song though!