[stainlessbrown]

As others have stated- a bit tooo over-processed- I'm also going to hazard a guess based on the style that you're right up on top of the mic... which adds to signal peak woes but also adds proximity effect which may be aggravating your efforts-

The blanket suggestion is a god one especially ify our facing into a bedroom wall and if you're standing where you're up against another bare wall, a blanket behind may also be worth trying- as to mic positioning I tell folks to place the palm of their hand over their mouth, raise their arm up so the elbow touches the mic- this is as close as you're allowed!

you have a nice emotive feel, don't kill it with fx!~