thanks for the comments, guys i'll be sure to check out all of your stuff in the next couple of days. the crackling on the beat was intentional (sounds like the dude used izotope's "Vinyl"). the beat was bought a while ago from a guy online. I really wish I had the separate tracks to mix.
im on headphones and laptop speakers until I can get to some monitors tomorrow. are the vocals too thin sounding? i sucked out some low mids and boosted some highs. I have a few other tracks on my bro's soundclick too
SoundClick artist: Andrew0568 - page with MP3 music downloads