[garageband]

My only real quibble is the gal singing through her nose. Man, there are just so many reasons to cut that crap out. I'm not sure of your standing and relationship with the singer. The best reason, rather than all the voice teacher finger-wagging my wife is capable of, is: Everyone sounds the same singing through their nose. I think we can agree that this a bad thing.

The "So-and-So has such-and-such bad habit and they do just fine" argument isn't very strong. I'd be willing to bet you don't let your boys get away with that one.

The song? Excellent, salable hit song title. It's a good, solid example of what they're doing up the road from you and right in line, artistically. They should outta buy it, it's better than most of what's coming off the assembly line these days.