[CyberCat]

I am thinking that the vocals need to come up a bit, and maybe bring the snare down a tad. Also maybe the Hi Hiats/tambourine needs to come down.

The drums appear to drop when the vocals start. Is that intentional?

I can almost hear the lead guitar in some parts.

I also think that the song could be transposed up one semitone to make hte key easier on the vocalist.

Nice arrangements though.